Y10 – 23/09/16

Due: 27/09 (Issued: 23/09)

Title: Building your story


Write the opening part of a story about a place that is severely affected by the weather. (40 Marks)
[24 marks content / organisation – 16 marks technical accuracy]

Content and Organisation [24 marks].

  • Keep your story simple
  • One or two characters
  • Present one main event
  • Event(s) takes place in the past
  • Event(s) takes place over a short period of time
  • Main event has just happened or is just about to take place
  • You are only writing the opening of a story

Technical Accuracy [16 Marks]
Have you used?

  • Simple sentences
  • Compound sentences (FANBOYS/ASBO)
  • Complex sentences (no comma)
  • Complex sentences (with a comma)
  • Complex sentences (star with -ing/-ed)
  • Varied vocabulary for effect