Due: 16/05 (Set: 12/05)
Title: Analysis and rewrite of Black Boy
Time: 20-25 minutes
- Write out your selected quotation in a spider diagram
- Explore keywords, subject terminology and connotations
- Complete your rewrite:
Point: The writer uses language to…
Evidence: This is revealed in the quotation “…”
Identify: The
Define: “…” shows/suggests…Writer: The writer is signifying / implying / suggesting…
because…Reader: The reader feels / imagines / thinks…
because…Link: Further, the writer…
This is further supported by the quotation “…”
Extract
Red circles were eating into the white cloth; then a flare of flames shot out. Startled, I backed away. The fire soared to the ceiling and I trembled with fright. Soon a sheet of yellow lit the room. I was terrified; I wanted to scream but was afraid. I looked around for my brother; he was gone. One half of the room was now ablaze. Smoke was choking me and the fire was licking at my face, making me gasp.